Sigh. Let’s talk about your site.
And start with a little tough love.
If you’re relying on referrals and repeat business to keep things going right now—you’re not alone.
But here’s the problem: in a market where budgets are tight, competition is fierce, and decision-makers are under pressure (some 63% of CMOs responding to the Spring 2025 report said that marketing is feeling increased pressure from the CFO, up from 52% who said the same in the Fall 2023 edition of the report – Marketing Charts), agencies and professional services firms can’t sit back and wait.
Your messaging has to do more, especially your site. You Can’t Control the Market, But You Can Control Your Positioning
Because like it or not, that homepage headline might be the only shot you get.
In this post (1 of 3), I’m walking through a few real-world agency site examples—anonymized on purpose—because this isn’t about being a jerk.
This is about showing you what’s not working, so you can take back control of your new business narrative.
And yes, these are real examples, laid out by the issues they represent.
Issue #1: Saying Nothing with a Lot of Words
“Turn up the volume on your marketing.”
It’s the first thing a prospect sees on this particular agency site—and it tells them nothing.
Catchy, I suppose, but it doesn’t give the visitor any sense of who the agency helps, what problems it solves, or what type of firm it is.
That space is prime real estate.
Don’t waste it on metaphors that could apply to any firm, anywhere.
It doesn’t get better on the second try, as the prospect scrolls down:
“We are experts, leaders, strategists, creators, disruptors and innovators revolutionizing the marketing landscape.”
You lost them at “disruptors.”
This kind of language is well-intentioned, but ultimately meaningless without context.
What’s the actual benefit to the client? What makes this firm worth their time?
Issue #2: Claiming Results—Without Showing Any
“Our results speak volumes.”
Cool. Show me.
This is the same site, and this language is found after scrolling a few more times.
If your site makes a claim about results but doesn’t back it up in an easily found way—case studies, proof points, metrics, quotes—it’s a red flag.
Prospects are skeptical by default.
You don’t earn trust by declaring it—you earn it by demonstrating it.
Issue #3: Making Prospects Work Too Hard
“Join the Transformational Growth Journey Powered by the Transformation Growth Engine.”
Now we’re on to a different site, and this is a real headline. Unfortunately.
When a prospect lands on your site, they need clarity in seconds.
Not a puzzle. Not a buzzword bingo board. And definitely not charts above the fold.
If it takes more than a few seconds to understand what kind of firm you are and who you serve, you’ve already lost the click.
This site goes on to break messaging into a scroll-through of circular diagrams, icons, and hard to read copyrighted names—without ever really saying what they do or who they help.
That’s a problem.
Especially when today’s buyers are moving fast and hunting for solutions, not abstract philosophies.
Issue #4: Leading with Fluff Over Substance
Another firm’s site opens with a name and a word cloud of adjectives.
That’s it.
The prospect doesn’t even get a sentence—just a collection of brand-y words that could just as easily describe a candle line or a wellness app.
Further down, their mission statement reads:
“To delight, inspire, create affinity and form essential connections with audiences, brands, products and services.”
There’s a place for aspiration—but not at the expense of clarity.
Especially when, a few scrolls later, the firm itself says:
“In a media-saturated, hyper-connected world, we have mere seconds to capture attention.”
Yes. Yes, you do. And that’s why your messaging has to work harder.
Issue #5: The “Process Page” Problem (AKA, Prospects Don’t Care About Your Process)
Again, you can’t control the market—but you can control your positioning
A lot of firms try to prove their legitimacy by showcasing their process—but it ends up doing the opposite typically.
Two examples:
- One agency maps out their process in a giant workflow diagram filled with generic icons and buzzwords. It’s visually busy, conceptually vague, and feels like it was pulled from an agency template circa 2011.
- Another opens their homepage with what looks like a PowerPoint slide: circular diagrams, arrows, and labels like “Transformation Growth Engine.” (see #3 above)
It’s hard to read, and harder to care about.
Here’s the problem: if your process page could be copied and pasted onto another firm’s site and still make sense (or not)—it’s not distinctive enough.
Clients don’t need to understand every step of your process. They need to understand:
- What outcomes it leads to
- Why it’s important
- How it solves the specific problems they’re trying to fix
Don’t lead with the machine—lead with the result.
Then, if they’re interested, you can show them how the gears turn.
So What’s the Fix?
Well, that’s in my next post, but for now:
- Be specific. Say who you help, how you help them, and why that matters. Quickly.
- Lead with outcomes. Start with what your work does, not how you feel about it.
- Back up your claims. Results don’t speak for themselves—they need a microphone.
- Think like a buyer. If you were your ideal client, would your site make you want to learn more?
The Big Idea: You Can’t Control the Market—But You Can Control Your Positioning
Your site may not be the first way a potential client hears about you—but it is where they’ll go next.
And when they do, the messaging they find will either move them forward… or close the door.
You can’t control the market, but you can control how you show up.
If you were a prospect, would you hire you?
In many of these cases, you don’t need a complete site re-work, you just need to change up the copy, or where it sits on your site.
Now’s the time to revisit how your firm tells its story.